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 Mr. Adams' Class (1st Place)  [E]
Mr. Adams had all the other teachers talking. How did he keep such discipline?
by BScholl
Review by Annette
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello BScholl


I came across this flash fiction through the Read & Review function.

Your story was captivating. Although I am not a teacher and wouldn't want to be one, I was very curious to find out what Mr. Adams's secret is. If I understand right, he's created a fictional persona that is entirely made up - down to a crime that he did not commit. But he's also able to bench press 350 lbs in front of others.

This was written in 2017, so you may not want to edit it, but if you ever come back here, you could fix the capitalization for these brand names:

wikipedia, facebook, linked in *Right* Wikipedia, Facebook, LinkedIn

Funny little story. I'm glad he's not my teacher.

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