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Given: Jun 15, 2024 at 9:51pm
Length: 1,589 Characters |
1,425 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A poem that speaks to the poet's friendship with Katherine.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the honest, candid tone of the poem. I could feel the respect the poet had for her friend.
STRUCTURE
This is an acrostic poem. This is style of poetry where the first letter of a word or phrase is used to start the line of a poem.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to highlight the letters and I liked how the picture captured the concept of the essence of friendship.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Testing the waters of courage and faith," This is a great description of how friends come together with shared experiences and the same or near temperaments in courage and faith. I picture friends sharing a challenging experience and emerging stronger in their friendship.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening introduces the reader to Katherine and keeps them reading, wanting to find out more. The title fits the poem. Feeling friendship is a really positive emotion that taps into respect and reverence which comes across here. Acrostics can be a challenge due to their limitations, but the poet meets the challenge nicely.
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