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 Boys Will Be Boys  [E]
Be careful about what you say around me.
by JACE
Review of Boys Will Be Boys  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, JACE! I am reviewing this because I need to add one more purple case review to the Army Angel June Challenge. *Smile* And after reading this piece, I'm so thrilled I chose it!

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* This was such a refreshing piece to read! I thoroughly enjoyed this little story from your past. I could picture you as a young lad, thinking you were doing Ms. Clara a huge favor by pulling up all her flowers, as she'd confesses..."I wish I'd never planted them," What a helpful little boy you were! *Laugh* This would make a great scene in a movie, lol. Maybe even on the old Leave It to Beaver show. *Wink* And all this happened on your fifth birthday. *Heart* I'm so relieved Ms. Clara and your mom were able to have a good laugh at the end. *Smile*

         *Bulletg* I was born in Del Rio, Texas where my dad was stationed in the Air Force in 1956, not too far from where you were. I remember him talking about San Antonio. He hated the wind down there though. He got out when I was four months old and we moved back to Michigan.

         *Bulletp* This was so well-written! Paragraph 9 was one of my favorites:

She screamed out my full name--nothing short of the sentence of death--bringing Ms. Clara out of her house. My friends and I were frozen to the ground. A broken beehive wouldn't have tempted us to move.

         *Bulletb* Congratulations on earning your first dollar! *Laugh*


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have no suggestions.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         What a joy this was to read! It was just so refreshing. Thank you for sharing this memory. *Heart*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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