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No love at first sight  [E]
Written for Write from the Heart Poetry
by Cadie Laine
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Review by StephBee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE POEM

This is a poem about building a love that would last.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the story of the poem grew and was glad to see a "happy ending."

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I had walls built up against my heart." The poet uses a good economy of words to pain a vivid picture. In this case, the poet is reluctant to give so quickly. One must get past the wall.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening lures the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a strong fit for the tone/mood of the poem. The poem was realistic and hopeful.

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