Hello, Tinker!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

What a fun and lovely poem and idea! I totally enjoyed this poem of yours.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this poem sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review for you (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "June" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I loved the opening line and the excitement you conveyed with it.

My favorite line was, "No harsh words, only delight," because it's a beautiful philosophy. Imagine if everyone lived this way! Our world would be so much nicer.

I could picture you printing out that poem and whooping in delight and then sharing it with everyone you met all day long. I imagined all kinds of smiles and connections and some curious looks. What a fun day that would be, spending it sharing your favorite poem with everyone you met!

I loved that you included your favorite poem and that both your poem and your favorite poem were eight lines each. It felt very "meant to be" and connected.

I think if we ever met in person I would adore you and we would have fun sharing poems and talking for hours.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your lovely writing poem.

I thought the writing and hobby/ craft genres you selected were perfect for this writing practice blog of yours.

You are loved and missed here. I hope you are able to come back and play with us more often! I was really glad to "see" you on your anniversary day! I pray that you are well and hope you have a beautiful summer!


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your writing joy poem again today.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler













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