TOUR DE PORTS 2024



Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 

Hello, Cat-Claws!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Wow! You wrote a very personal and interesting Dear Me letter back in 2007!

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end without any pauses.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I perused your portfolio to find something to review today and happened upon this little gem. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You had me cheering for you to succeed as I read your personal Dear Me letter. I wondered if you'd accomplished all that you set out to do that year? I hope so! If so, hurray for you! If not, have you done it by now? If so, hurray for you! If not, why not get started now? Perhaps even today! Unless your goals have changed. Whatever you do, I wish you success.

I liked that you added blue check marks and a couple emojis to your Dear Me letter for visual interest.

I was intrigued by all of your projects that you mentioned, especially the cheetah one. I love cheetahs too. They are such beautiful big cats, and such fast runners.

I liked that you were realistic and encouraging with yourself throughout your Dear Me letter.

I liked that you included an art project in your Dear Me letter, so it wasn't all about writing (even though this is a writing site, and that would be perfectly fine!). I think that made it more interesting and personal.

I liked that you included a reminder to pray for God's guidance in your Dear Me letter. Prayer is important and powerful and no one loves you more than the Lord God Almighty.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your Dear Me letter.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for Dear Me letter of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness (and because of the rules of Tour de Ports review challenge I'm in require that, I have a suggestion to make your piece stronger. I'm having to dig deep for this as I really thought your piece was well done as it is though. I also think such an personal piece should be left to stand on its own. So if you want to skip this part, no worries at all! Just move on to the next section and know that I enjoyed your Dear Me letter.


The only thing I can think of is to add a thumbnail picture, if your membership level allows that. It could gain you extra readers because pictures (and the extra color they tend to bring) are attention getting, so your Dear Me letter might catch more potential readers' eyes on searches and portfolio scans.



CONCLUSION:
You have a personable and interesting writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your Dear Me letter.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler







Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .