A woman is trying to figure out a way to save horses from dying. Problem is, enemy forces are in the city, and as a result, she keeps being seriously injured. Good news is, her new body is able to resist damage, but it won't belong before this body fails too. Will she be able to succeed, or will here work be all for nothing?

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but you might want some space between paragraphs.

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I'm curious to see more about this story, like why horses were so important.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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