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 Funny World  [13+]
A man is saved by a dog chasing a cat.
by Winchester Jones
Review of Funny World  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I'm very glad this story had a happy ending for you, the dog, and the cat. When you described your feet hanging over the waters as you pondered the situation, I felt like I was with you and wanted to grab you to get your attention so you would not fall off the bridge. Although the scene is dark because of the possibility of death capturing your life, it also was bright because of the lights, moon, and objects illuminated that the eyes could enjoy.

I believe God sent the dog, cat, and person to you because you have something special to do. Your written words can help other people. They definitely spoke to me. My heart sank at the beginning of your story and was uplifted at the end of it when you gave the cat a loving home. Angels were with you I could tell in my spirit because of the words you shared with me.

Thank you for writing about your experience on the bridge and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

"a very Wodehouse challenge

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