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My Tabby Tiger  [E]
Felix cuddles up sweetly in the evening, after a big day.
by H❀pe
Review of My Tabby Tiger  
Review by Choconut
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi H❀pe ,

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


This review is in affiliation with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" . Please remember, these opinions are purely my own, and any advice is given with the sole intention of being helpful.


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What I liked


*StarV* What a charming poem! I was drawn to this poem because of the cute picture you have used as the cover. Your kitty looks like such a cutie. (Albeit, a killer. But a cute one.) Is his name 'Tiger'?

*StarV* I like the abcb, defe, etc. rhyme scheme in the poem. It makes it read fluidly and smoothly. The rhythm is really good for the most part.

*StarV* The story this poem tells is my favourite part of it. I love how cute your kitty is, whilst at the same time, you are telling us how he is a natural born killer, catching butterflies and mice. Even rabbits. (Although, I did wonder if the bunny was only in his dreams, and not in reality.) My friend lives on the edge of some woods, and one of her cats was prolific in the hunting world. He often brought mice and other small animals into her house. I guess the temptation was too great for him, living where he did!


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Suggestions


I guess the third verse is the one where the rhythm doesn't work quite as well. While I think the words are funny, they just feel a little off. I think it is "butterflies." The stresses of the word aren't quite right. But that is me being picky.


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Parting Comments


I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is a great tribute to your kitty, who, I have to say, is absolutely beautiful. Great work.

Happy account anniversary!


Choconut

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