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| (5.0)   Hi, Jace! What a lovely poem to honor your wife. I could feel the love you two have for each other through your words. It was a simple poem, but held a lot of emotion and I enjoyed the choppiness between the length of the rhymes. ~~~ This poem started off happy and ended happy.  I feel, at least for me personally, that it’s hard to write an emotional poem without adding some darker aspects to it. You kept it light and positive but still managed to make it an emotional piece. Well done.~~~ I have no suggestions as to how to make this a better piece as far as grammar/spelling. Your word choice was simple, but effective in pulling the reader in to read more about your shared love. I loved the pauses between the longer and shorter lines, adding a unique rhythm to your poem. ~~~ Overall, I really enjoyed this poem! You have a talent writing poetry and this is a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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