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Hi, Kurt!

This was a lovely and dark poem about our writing, and how time moves on too quickly sometimes and disables us from enjoying and relishing in those wonderful moments we often write about. At least, that was how I took the piece. This is one of those poems that could have multiple meanings which I tend to love when reading poetry. I'm interested to know if you had another intention while writing it if you're inclined to share. Excellently done.

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Your format of this poem was great, and I liked the word choices you used. The offset short lines added a nice rhythm to the piece and you managed to pull that off well with such few lines.

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I have no suggestions for grammar/spelling. This is a very short poem, and you didn't utilize punctuation or anything and kept it very simple. I like that and felt, along with your vocabulary used, it fit the style of the poem well.

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Overall, I really liked this piece. You have great talent as a poet, as I've read a couple of your other pieces in the past couple days as I roam the wide site of WdC. You fit a lot of emotion into such few lines and you executed your words flawlessly. I hope to see more from you and experience your writing again soon!

Thank you for sharing!

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