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 that pale no hoper  [E]
Going through life
by Chico Mahalo
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Review by ruwth
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


Chico Mahalo,

Welcome to Writing.Com (also known as WdC).

I found your post: "Szia" from Noticing Newbies  and it drew me to your port. I don't remember the title of your post being "Szia". Did you change it or did I just not notice? The post itself was interesting. Some of it is included in your Bio-Block, eh?

I suggest you answer one or two of the questions on your Biography tab. Take your time doing it though. You do not have to answer every question BUT once you have put something it one of those textboxes, I don't think you can delete the box (if my memory serves me). You can change the text but you might not be able to delete the text box.


Now, about this item:

Is this a true story? If so, it sounds like you have had an interesting life.

It is not clear to me what this item was intended to be. Is it the second part of something. If it is, I suggest adding that info to the item.

Hope you find what you are looking for here at Writing.Com!




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