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46 Total Reviews Given
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I have experience looking for consistency. I fully believe in Keep It Simple & Succinct. *Smile*
Favorite Genres
Mostly Fantasy and Speculative Fiction, but will read almost anything. These days most of my "reading" is done with audio books.
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Review of Bathman  
Review by Just Jae
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice! I can fully appreciate your frustration over dangling participles and split infinitives. As a technical writer in the computer storage industry, I also spend my day chasing down errant punctuation and juxtaposing compound sentences.

Your wonderful description of The Wordsmith whizzing down the road in the Wordmobile had me laughing out load. Carry on and keep up the good work. *Smile*
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Review of Do you really?  
Review by Just Jae
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very solid emotion is conveyed in this piece. As I read through it a second time, I was reading in a rap cadence and could almost see a young woman rapping this to her father as she walked out the door, leaving him to his own devices. This is a powerful piece.
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Review by Just Jae
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well spoken. Even though I am an American Lesbian, I know enough about the culture in India to know that your essay and poem took a lot of guts to write, let alone publish. I sincerely hope your journey of self-discovery continues.

Like you, I believe that homosexuality is a natural condition in the grand scheme of life.

I wish I had been able to read the poem. All I can see are question marks.

Best of luck in your life. *Smile*
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Review by Just Jae
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can't wait to read more. I will be interested to find out what happened during the lost years. You have introduced a number of intriguing questions in your preface.

I am curious as to why you have so much space between paragraphs.
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