 Noticing Newbies: July 24, 2024 Issue [#12657] |
This week: Pulling Focus Edited by: Jeff  
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About The Editor: Greetings! My name is Jeff and I'm one of your regular editors for the Noticing Newbies Official Newsletter! I've been a member of Writing.com since 2003, and have edited more than 400 newsletters across the site during that time. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to contact me via email or the handy feedback field at the bottom of this newsletter! 
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Pulling Focus
Continuing last month's theme of taking a concept from the world of filmmaking and applying it to the writing domain, let's talk a little bit about pulling focus. On a film set, the First Assistant Camera is responsible for keeping the subject in focus throughout a scene. For example, if an actor is shooting a scene where they're walking toward the camera, the actor would eventually go out of focus if the First Assistant Camera wasn't adjusting the focus ring on the camera to keep the actor clearly in focus as the distance between the camera and its subject changes. For that reason the First Assistant Camera is sometimes informally referred to as a "focus puller," and it's one of the most important and demanding jobs on a film set. Their job is essentially to keep the most important elements of a scene in focus for the audience.
So what does this have to do with our writing?
As writers, our job is also to pull focus and keep the important elements of our story front and center for our reader. There are so many aspects of a story that can be focused on. Depending on the type of story you're telling and the narrative devices you use, you have so many elements at your disposal to play with: setting, story, characterization, dialogue, maybe even a character's inner thoughts or emotions. If you to try to include all of those details all of the time, your reader can easily become distracted or confused because they're not sure what elements are important and which ones aren't. Similarly, if you focus on the wrong details, it can significantly affect your reader's experience with the story.
Let's look at this in practice.
When you're first starting a story, it's highly likely that you're going to spend a considerable amount of time describing the setting. You need to convey context and background to your reader, and the types of surroundings your characters find themselves in can make a big difference. For example, a story that starts in a city rather than on a tropical island will have a different feel to it. A character waking up in a tiny, decrepit apartment communicates something different than a character who wakes up in the high-roller suite of a hotel. The things that a character surrounds themselves with (the decor in their home, the things they interact with, etc.) tells you something about the character, so it's not uncommon to spend the early part of a story "setting the stage" by spending a little extra time detailing the environment.
As the dramatic tension in the story builds, though, there will necessarily be parts of the narrative where detailing every location with the same level of description is a hindrance, because it draws the reader's attention away from the urgency of the plot or the importance of an important story point by highlighting the mundane aspects of the character's surroundings. By continuing to accentuate the details of the setting later in the story, you might be "pulling focus" of the reader away from your story and characters and highlighting details of the setting that aren't actually relevant. It's like a First Assistant Camera who never adjusts the focus ring of the camera, so as the characters walk toward the camera, the background remains sharply in focus while the characters become blurry and ill-defined.
Writers have the ability to guide the reader's experience throughout the course of telling a story. Where a lot of writers go wrong is when the choices they make pull the reader's focus in a direction that's not engaging or, in some cases, actively detrimental to the story they're trying to tell. You've probably experienced this with books, movies, or other media that you haven't enjoyed:
 A story that bores you because it's taking too long to get started and spending too much time delving into seemingly needless details.
A story where the twist ending seems to come out of nowhere because the story didn't do a good enough job laying out the clues ahead of time.
A character that's hard to empathize with or understand because there isn't enough backstory or context to understand their motivations.
A setting that feels ill-defined or generic because there isn't enough unique detail or description to make it feel realistic.
The best way to ensure you're getting your intentions across as a writer is to make sure you're pulling the reader's focus toward what you want them to pay attention to, and to deprioritize the other elements of the story. The most eloquent, vibrant, detailed description of a setting will be lost on a reader that's at the very climax of the story and wondering how the plot will shake out. A character's major revelation and completion of their story arc is less impactful if the reader hasn't first learned to care for the character.
Whenever you're writing a chapter, a scene, or even just a sentence, make sure you're always clear with yourself on what your intentions are and what you want your reader to be focusing on. Pull their focus toward the things that best serve your narrative and its characters.
Until next time,
Jeff
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