For Authors: March 16, 2016 Issue [#7538]
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 This week: Anthologies & Collections
  Edited by: Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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3. Letter from the Editor
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6. Ask & Answer
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Letter from the editor


ANTHOLOGIES & COLLECTIONS


For many writers - especially the ones who also write shorter works like poetry, short stories, novellas, etc. - the idea of combining multiple works into a more substantive piece is probably not new. There are a variety of reasons why a writer would consider a collection, the most popular of which include:

*BookOpen* Short stories and poems alone are rarely profitable. In a world where we can buy entire novels for as little as $0.99 (or even download or check them out at a library for free), there really isn't a price point that makes sense for a standalone poem or a 2,000-word short story. You'd have to charge pennies, at which point it raises an issue of why you're charging at all when you would need to sell hundreds just to buy a cup of coffee. When those shorter works are combined into a collection or anthology, though, the volume of material suddenly becomes more worthwhile for a consumer because you're not just trying to get them to buy that 2,000-word story; you're trying to get them to buy 50,000 words' worth of short stories... and if you can put together a novel-length offering, you can change novel-length prices without offending consumers with a higher price point.

*BookOpen* Bundles are more appealing to consumers. This is particularly popular among self-published authors, but the idea of bundling some of your works together is certainly not new. For series writers, you can often find an entire boxed set of the series when it's finished, or perhaps the first few books in an ongoing series available together as a "starter pack" of sorts. Janet Evanovich's books retail around the typical hardcover price of $27.99, but you can also buy a hardcover omnibus edition of her first three Stephanie Plum mysteries for $28.00. For a penny more, you're getting three books for the price of one hardcover! And self-published authors are keen on this too; independent supernatural thriller author J.F. Penn sells most of her ebooks for $4.99 each, but you can buy the first three ebooks in her ARKANE series for $6.99, which makes them a much better value. People love good sales and hefty discounts, so providing them with one in the form of a lower-priced collection or anthology is a great way to hook them.

*BookOpen* It might not be your collection. Lots of writers get their start in publishing with shorter pieces in other peoples' publications. It might be a poem for an online magazine, or an editorial in The Atlantic, or a short story published in Analog or the Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine. For many authors, the initial hurdle of having their first piece of writing published is overcome through the inclusion of their work in other people's anthologies or collections.


The question I want to explore in this newsletter, though, is:

What makes a good anthology or collection?


For the purposes of this discussion, I'm going to avoid talking about the third point above, which deals with writers being published in other people's anthologies. That's a topic for a whole other newsletter, suffice to say that you probably shouldn't be too terribly picky where you get published if you haven't been published yet... and if you do feel like you can afford to be picky, then you probably already know what kind of anthologies and collections you're willing to submit to and which ones you aren't. *Wink*

That leaves us with combining our own work into collections, whether that be a bunch of short stories or larger works like novellas or even full novels. Over the years, I've read a lot of volumes of collected short stories, poems, and novellas and have come up with a few points that I think make the difference between a good and bad collection. (I'm also going to start calling them all "collections" for ease of writing, even though I technically mean all collections, anthologies, compendiums, digests, omnibuses, compilations, etc.).

*Idea* Good collections have a common thread. The worst collections I read are the ones that have no rhyme or reason. These are the ones that seem like the author just took a random assortment of short stories, copied and pasted them into the same book, and sent it out into the world. Good collections have some kind of common thread that connects the smaller works and gives the reader a feeling of consistency throughout the read. Common threads can include, but are certainly not limited to: a sequential number of works (like the first three books in a series), genre (all the stories are sci-fi, or romance, or horror), subject matter (each story is about a crime, or ghosts, or set in the same small town), and/or thematic (all of the works explore an idea or concept that's important to the writer). If you're assembling a collection and you want it to really stand out, make sure you can identify the common thread and aren't just tossing a bunch of stuff in a blender and expecting a bestseller to come out.

*Idea* Good collections are a good value. Whether we're talking about a bunch of short stories and poems or a few novels, make sure the reader is getting a good value for their money. This is especially true in self-publishing where you can regulate your own pricing; you need to make sure you're offering your readers something that feels like it's worth their time and money. If you sell 75,000-word ebooks on Amazon for $4.99 and then suddenly want them to pay that same $4.99 for a collection of short stories that's only 10,000 words long, it's going to create a perception problem with the way you expect your readers to value your work.

*Idea* Good collections are consistent. Another major problem I see in some collections is that they're wildly inconsistent in the kind of material they include. I've seen collections that include everything from 99-word micro fiction to novella-length stories, and everything from everyday crime to supernatural crime. As a reader, it can be really off-putting to never quite know what you're going to get from a story or even a whole collection. Am I about to read a hundred 500-word stories, or am I about to read five 10,000-word stories? Are these crime stories about bank robberies and kidnappings and murder, or are they about superhumans and aliens and ancient evil curses? When you offer your reader a collection, you want them to instantly be able to recognize what that anthology is about and they need to be reassured that their expectations will be consistently met.

*Idea* Good collections have variety. This might seem a little antithetical with my previous point, but there are two things I want to say on the topic of variety. First, you need to give the reader some kind of variance in the kind of stories you tell. Horror is great, but if they're all haunted house stories, it gets old fast. Erotica is great, but if they're all boss-and-his-sexy-secretary stories, it gets old fast. There needs to be enough variety to keep surprising the reader with each new entry in your collection. Second, you can vary the type and style of material you include, as long as you're organized about it. There's actually nothing wrong with including a 500-word short story in the same collection as a 10,000-word short story, or a supernatural crime story in the same collection as a regular crime collection... but strongly consider incorporating some kind of organized structure so that readers know what to expect. Maybe the stories progress from shortest to longest, or maybe your collection is broken up into sections where all the regular crime stories are in one section, and there's a clearly marked delineation between that and the supernatural crime stories in a subsequent section.


What all of this advice is ultimately leading toward is the following. Here's the TL;DR version of my advice:

A good anthology needs to be organized, with a common thread and good value.


Anthologies and collections can be a great way for a writer to consolidate a lot of their earlier or assorted works into a more appealing package for consumers. But there are a lot of unappealing collections out there and I think key to having a successful finished product is creating one that makes sense. It needs to be organized well enough to give the readers a sense of what they're buying into. Don't just surf through your WdC portfolio and pull out the highest rated stories and put them all into the same book regardless of length, genre, or story elements. Instead, put some thought into what you want to accomplish with a collection and then take the time to find or newly write the kind of material that will best accomplish that goal. At the end of the day, collections and anthologies are no different than any other kind of book; it has to be good if you want people to buy it. And there's a considerable difference between something that's been thrown together and something that's clearly had some thought put into it. *Smile*

Until next time,

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Ask & Answer



Feedback from my last newsletter about the substance and style of reviewing ("For Authors Newsletter (February 17, 2016)Open in new Window.):


Oldwarrior Author Icon writes: "An excellent essay. I only wish everyone on WDC would read and apply the principles mentioned."

Thank you so much for the kind words!



Nixie🦊 Author Icon writes: " Good and bad examples, Jeff. The key word is respect. Imagine receiving the review you're sending to another author. And we must all remember once the review is posted, there's no editing. Think thrice before hitting submit. I never used to include the words "I think" because obviously what I'm writing is what I'm thinking. But qualifying the statement takes away the sting. I often use (for me) as another way to deflect negativity from the author. We're all just people. And reviewing is one hot topic around here."

I'm the same way; I was taught in school that saying "I think," "I believe," or "I feel," is weak writing because it emphasizes the fact that it's an opinion rather than a confident stance, but there is so much value to using those phrases in the real world to parse your comments and reassure the recipient that your words are just that... an opinion. Thanks for writing in!



Kanish ~ we got this! Author Icon writes: "Hi Jeff, I have read your short stories before and have been Wow-ed by them..And now, here comes your newsletter and sweeps me off my feet! Pretty amazing stuff. In addition to what yo wrote, I think, it is also very important to be honest to the writer. Some of us, including me, sometimes, just add fluff to the review because we don't care enough to take 2 minutes time and think about it. Rather, we just shoot off the hip. Only if we were as careful and honest while reviewing as we are while writing, the review stuff would be a lot better. PS: May I please request you one ting. It would be very helpful if in every newsletter you could include the link to previous newsletter. I missed the previous one :("

Thanks so much for the kind words and the feedback! And I agree; it's so easy (and therefore tempting) to churn out a quick, effusive review that isn't as honest as it is inoffensive. It takes time and effort to apply a critical eye to a piece, and even more time to communicate that criticism in a positive and encouraging way. But those are ultimately the most rewarding review experiences, and the ones that I think most of us are hoping to receive!

I'll try to remember to link past newsletters in my current ones, but if you're ever looking to read through past issues, you can find them in the archive, which is accessible by the left-column navigation menu. Just got to Writing Resources > Newsletters > Writing.Com Newsletter Archives. You can find all past newsletters there, and I'm a regular editor for this For Authors Newsletter and the Mystery Newsletter, with new editorials for each every month. *Smile*



Vaughan Jones - ONE Scribe Author Icon writes: "Thank you for this newsletter in which you certainly provide valuable writing and reviewing guidelines. For the first time in my writing career have I realized the value of receiving and providing a well structured and objective review. It is clear that reviewers often review a script subjectively instead of being objective in their view and comment."

Thanks for writing in! I'm glad you've found the value in a thorough review; those are always definitely a breath of fresh air and it's certainly a help to be known as someone who can return the favor! *Smile*



Monty Author Icon writes: "You know Jeff, even a poet who has given up writing anything but poetry can learn from that which might seem to be aimed at stories. A good N/L."

Thank you!



Dave2write Author Icon writes: "Thank you for this article about reviewing, I have seen how some author's critique others and want them to write the way they do and they can mess your creativity up (trust me I know). You made some very valid points and excellent examples. Since I'm not very good at critiquing yet I want to thank you for some constructive pointers. I also have to thank you for putting my story in your 'Editor's Picks'"

You're very welcome! Thanks for sharing your feedback!



Osirantinous Author Icon writes: "Sound advice, Jeff, for writers and reviewers!"

Thank you!



Nwriter Author Icon writes: "Hi Jeff, Thank you for writing very precise descriptions of style and substance.My reviews will be lots better now. I realize now how blunt I may have been. Regards, Nwriter."

I'm glad this newsletter has helped you with your reviewing! I think all reviewers can improve their skills and if this editorial gave you some ideas about how to do that, I'm thrilled and grateful for the opportunity to help! *Bigsmile*



Tornado Dodger Author Icon writes: "Great editorial Jeff, as usual. I definitely can see the benefit of a small more detailed audience getting used to your work and giving you detailed critique. I look forward to hearing how it's working for you. *Smile*"

Thanks, Brooke! Great to hear from you again!


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