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Nobody Dances Better Than One-Legged Charlie
Doin’ The Pogo Wit Charlie

Nobody dances better than
one-legged Charlie. Admire
how you do that Pogo step, man!

We admit, that leg lit fire!

Settin’ sun sure don’t have his glow,
flow. You know? Collar tight! Those eyes
blaze, feelin’ his best, we know.
Hop on in, and we’ll surprise.

We feel you hop! The real, it’s hot!
Charlie coolin’. His summer spot!


6.29.24
Ravenfly form, 10 lines

Playing with voice and the opening sentence that popped in my head and wanted the two to play with the short, tight form, keeping summer in mind.

I’ve been scattin’ again, comes easy with caffeine. *Laugh*

Wrote three other Ravenfly poems before this idea happened, including one with 'Carmen Blazing Hair', toying with creating visual characters. I'll add to post someday?

Notion: making the best of your joy with limitations and the love you inspire that seems like a beautiful summer day coolin’ and the party just getting started. Me, without restrictions. Ideal: have friends join in. Poetry Jam, man.

I can't tell what era I'm writing in. I mixed it a bit, possibly.

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