A look at my personal life and thoughts.

reading and writing.

I read for an hour and played for an hour and a half. I also worked on my 8th Thrice Prompted story. I got good feedback from Tobber about one of my stories. If there is one simple thing I took from it. I would say it would be not to info dump. I told Tobber what should do instead. She basically said it is one of the hardest things to do especially in a sci-fi or fantasy. She suggested looking how the pros do it. After I got her feedback, I went to write more for my 8th story and there was tons of info dumping at the beginning. I fixed some of it.
I got up late today and I didn’t go to the gym. I’ll try again tomorrow.
Jim worked a later shift at about 12:45 pm. I may hit the PS4 more before the night is done.
In light of what Tobber said, I fear my novel may be much worse than I think. I may just post my chapters on WdC after all. I fear I may have info dumped like crazy. It may need major surgery.
It rained today but not very much. I’ve noticed it gets really dark early now. It is not much passed 5pm and it is dark. I do plan go to the store later. So this will be short. Lol.
Someone tried to break into Chad’s mom’s house at 8 am. Apparently, the assailant tried to open the door and turned the handle. All this happened in broad daylight. That seems to be the way now days. Thieves are gutsy.
Well, that is it for now, Goodnight.