Thank God for photography, right? I like the pace of your poem. Snap, Snap. Your words remind me of the act of picture taking. Your imagery works really well here. Each part of the poem becomes a new "picture". As a ex-professional photographer, I understand what you are doing here. It seems like you were taking a quick succession of pictures of him as he physically approached you (or your heart). Very effective. I really enjoyed reading it for the first time, but upon a more careful reading the second time, I liked it even more. My gauge for reading someone's work is if I want to keep re-reading it, there is something special about it.
Your poem is very special! Thanks for sharing.
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