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Red  [13+]
One of the most vivid dreams I have dreamed. The town has decided to take a stand.
by TJ Marie
Review of Red  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Review of Red

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review is being done as part of the Game of Thrones competition.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The story of a dream where the populace is opposed to the king and it seems something terrible is going to happen to them. They are singled out from the rest of the crowd. One of the disturbing feature is the heroine in the story must send her young daughter away. This seems to be the main theme of the story.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Sarah is the character who is the narrator of the story. Her husband is Red and he is the leader of this group from Hammerton. Her young daughter is Cassie and there is a teaeful parting of the two. The story does not seem to have a full conclusion.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Complete the story. What happens?

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing.

dblameck

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