Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I love poetry from the heart and I am truly sorry for your loss. Your grief struck me in this piece and your description of being called back to him brings me solace for all the loved ones I have lost.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Thank you for sharing your pain. It does not make people who share grief feel isolated. I think this piece speaks to people who look for greater meaning in loss as I do and others.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I felt your purpose. Your sister, in my heart, was indeed a special angel required.

Glows:

It's a deeply moving tribute to someone you lost that you loved so dearly. It's brave to make ourselves vulnerable to our words. I don't choose counseling during my tumultuous times. I probably should, but instead, I choose to write. My grief stands with yours and I want to thank you for showing your bravery. My favorite line I watch a silent tear roll down my face knowing there's no one to take your place. It reminds me of how I feel about my sister.



Grows:

None. It's such a moving piece, and others can be so touched by it that I think it supercedes criticism.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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