Hi Jakrebs, I am reviewing you story "The Issues of Issues" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This biographical comedy is about a guy who somehow manages to say something wrong on his date, and the date is summarily cut short. The man in question then decides that he will come up with a "Top Ten List" of times to that a guy should reveal personal baggage to a partner. This post was funny, witty, and highly entertaining.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: The list was well written. I have no suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: I really enjoyed your writing. It was really funny, the best part was number 3. "You can ad lib them into your wedding vows (Ex: In sickness and in mental sickness)." Oh, man that was too funny. I could actually see that happening or actually have happened to someone. Thank you so much for writing this.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones"