Hi Christianna, I am reviewing your story "Trip From Hell" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ The title of the story explains just exactly what the story is, a trip from hell. This short is about a woman who takes a trip on a cruise and what could go wrong absolutely and unequivocally did so.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I do not have anything to offer you as far as suggestions. Your short seems to be well written.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was an entertaining tale of one woman's vacation from hell. When she first arrived she her luggage broke. Then, her room wasn't ready after she had paid extra for it to be ready, she then decides to go to the buffet to get food, I mean what could go wrong there? She has to first stand in line next to smelly people and then she is accosted by an ugly guy who refused to leave her alone. I really enjoyed reading this short story it was highly entertaining.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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