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  |  | The Lone Survivor  [13+] The Olympics, one hundred years from now...  |
| (5.0)  Hello there willwilcox This is a
 I am also reviewing your item because it popped-up on the Random Read & Review. I mean it really did pop-up, as I unintentionally hit the button.  No matter, I figured what the heck, I always enjoy a good Olympics show.Characters with odd characters: Troy Kealy -- The great one. The one representing America in these future Olympics. Warren Bost -- the previous first choice to represent, but stuck as the back-up And assorted military officials and robots. Persons or things not to be messed with.  Location, location, location: New South Africa -- Cape Town Superior Strength: Troy was the lone survivor of a Mars fiasco. Sprouting body Parts: Yup, he was a sprouting them up down, left and right and with a 360 view. Well qualified if not over qualified as his very own humanity was at stake.  Observation: "The man’s grip could have a cracked a walnut." Doubled up on the "a." Conclusion:  As with all of your stories, whether human, alien or machinery, you pull your reader into the show, front and center. There's sufficient mystery surrounding the character and also, a cringy aspect of dark to horror that infuses the senses.Good job, Bill!  Until next time--write on! Regards, WW   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 12/03/2019 @ 1:24am EST