Interesting is all I can say. You have taken hope of the remains of the human race, had it die away without any human knowledge, and then destroyed any evidence of the hope or humanity existing. I like the way you took "hope" from the bright beginning, through a slow death, while still existing and then snubbed it out at the last moment, right when the possibility of everything being ok existed.

There was no problem seeing the scene you painted with words. I found no grammatical errors.

I tend to be a happy-ever-after (HEA) ending person so I was waiting for everyone to wake up out of stasis or something.

Thank you for posting

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