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Given: Feb 22, 2023 at 3:20am
Length: 638 Characters |
509 w/o WritingML
What a delightful poem!
I could picture this fella devouring apples. The title, brief description, genres, layout, rhyme scheme and verse structure work well to tell the tale. I was smiling throughout.
Suggestion:
I would like to know how he gets the apples he eats.
Does he climb trees? Buy them? People give him? Or does he even steal a few? I think it would add to the poem if we could see the acquisition and consumption!
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