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| (4.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Star! I am reviewing this because today is your 1st Anniversary at Writing.com.  And I hope you have many more! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Passion does burn into the mind, I agree. Nice way to begin this piece.  Nicely written and flows well.  Okay, so I have to be honest. I think I may have misinterpreted this piece.  I truly thought it was about passion between humans. But then I noticed one of your genre categories was Nonsense; (the other is Personal.) And your item cover is that of a cat. So...I'm not exactly sure what to think. Is it about the cat? But no matter, your words are well written, and I noticed no spelling, grammar, or spelling errors. Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderThis is only a thought, as it's not incorrect if you choose to write it all in one line, but you might consider breaking it up. Of course this is entirely up to you.  Your title summary reads Just to say something for today. You might want to change that, but again, it's up to you. Final ThoughtsI liked this piece very much, but I'm still a bit confused about the cat and the Nonsense category. You could always add Romance as a genre, if indeed it's about a relationship, but again, I'm unsure. But your words are lovely, at any rate!  Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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