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 Realization  [E]
Realizing you've grown up, but not in a good way.
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Review of Realization  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Everything in our material life is apparent. Nothing is permanent except the existence of God.
In our childhood, our life was less complicated. We tried to enjoy every little bliss.
The situation had been changed. Now we count the remaining days. With the time, we lost physical strength. So we're counting the end of life from. On that day, God embraced us in our true home and. we will an endless freedom. That's a brilliant realization.
You need to work hard to choose the genres. 'None' means nothing. If it's emotional how can use 'None'? If you face difficulty in sorting out the genres. You may use the genre 'Other'. That makes sense.
Anyway, it is a bright beginning.
Keep writing.


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