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Review of Desk  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's brilliant poetry that is related to our career.
We are indeed very much concerned about careers which help to build our professional life. That willingness makes us successful.
But, after a certain period, we become tired. When we feel it too much, we should go for a short break. Wise people do that. After a few days, they may return with their full energy.
If that person doesn't adopt that policy, what will happen then? That person will feel bored and even their career will end soon.
Some correct advice is in this poem.
Keep writing.


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Review of Grief  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We, the people of the material world, are not immortal. Everybody must die after a certain period. But, is it all over? No. The writer informs us from his personal experiences, that we remember those dead souls in our subconscious minds due to their deeds. Right or wrong doesn't matter at all.
I fully agree with the writer. I appreciate his minute-level of watching ability. We must be careful about our deeds as people will remember me as an honest person.
It is a bright and impressive beginning.
Keep writing.
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Review of Scrap Metal  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The main character of the story was none other than Ed. His dog Old Duke also played an important role. That story also fulfilled all the characteristics of an ideal Flash Fiction should have.
Suspense was all through the story. What the metal was! Ultimately, it was found as a scrap metal. Ed felt shame.
It's a brilliant creation.
Write on!
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly a thoughtful prose poem. The teller understands that he is usually getting late. So, the success will remain out of reach once again. That makes him a bit frustrated.
He learned from his previous mistakes, the patience played a key role. So, he rearranges himself and prepares for a better result.
It's a lesson of life which can't be earned without proper experiences.
It is a valuable addition.
Write on!
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Review of Lost  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Undoubtedly, it's a thoughtful poetry. The narrator is living his life. In his heart, a ghost roaming randomly. Her sweet voice mesmerized him. He wishes to build a relationship but he can't.
In reality, we are souls. God remains there as an eternal soul. He is in our hearts but we can not meet him except the true devotees until death due to our sinful deeds. After death, God embraces us. The teller wants to meet God and wants to spend a devoted life. That wish may direct you to lead a sacred life.

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Review of Mirage Part One  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The story begins with a common problem. Kyle was the main character of the first chapter. We often see that a young adult feels too shy to express his love. This problem was highlighted in this chapter. But he had an accident. He was in a coma.
We entered another part of the story. The real part. Fantasy began to flourish in the second chapter. Keil played the key role. Other characters were also crucial. Anyhow, they crossed the first of the three parts to "Mirage". What will happen in the next two parts?
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Unfortunately, the central character of the story was none other than Hilda. Her mom Whitelea's character also played an important role in the story. After returning to Unova, how a mom became a trainer of her daughter and taught her feet-licking. It unexpectedly happened. That was a great turnaround in her life and lived a comfortable life.
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Review of Stone  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a poem about a depressed lover. Most probably his appeal was severely rejected from the other side which made him mourn. He decides to cut all connections to her. It's a combination of both his sadness and helplessness. But, he never her beauty. He tried hard to unlock her heart's door but failed. Her heart is made of stone. It's very tough to convince her. But, the try should go on.
But, now there is no shine of hope. Everything is completely dark.
It's truly a beautiful poem. We can read the teller's mind properly.
It is a brilliant beginning.
Keep writing.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is truly a fantastic lyric that inspires us to remain hopeful. What is a magical dream? The dream which satisfies your ability. That will fulfil your ambitions. If it is the dream of true love, it will carry you to your mission. It is tough to get it but not impossible.
The positive thoughts are reflected in your lyrics. We need to apply it in our lives.
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Review of Longing  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
You have done another splendid job. What a beautiful poem it is!
It is a poem about true love. They loved each other very much. But, one of them is no more now. So, the other lover is searching for another. But, none looks comparable to that lover. But, the remaining lover will not accept the defeat. The search will be going on.
The emotion of the teller touches our hearts. We, the readers, also feel the pain.
The problem of genre selection also remains as it was before. 'Romance/Love', 'Relationship'-- these genres are expected.
It is a fantastic poem.
Go ahead.
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Review of Stand Tall  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poet shares with us an experience of a relationship. The basis of every relationship is respect. If disrespect has been shown so frequently, that relationship does not last long, it must break down like a castle of sands.
That is what happened in the teller's life.
His/Her partner was not ready to give minimum respect. As a result, the relationship broke down. As a human, the narrator feels better. Now, none would insult unnecessarily. As a human, the teller may live a free and respectful life.
It's truly a wonderful poem. Everything is outstanding.
But you must work on choosing genres. It is very vital. Genres are indicators of your writing. You can use the genRelationship', 'Experience', 'Emotion' or any other suitable genres. 'None' is considered as a negative genre. Try to avoid its application.
Go ahead.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderfully expressed poem it is! Loneliness is such a pain that can not allow you to enjoy the beauty of nature. You wholeheartedly want a company. You wish that your partner would be better in the true sense. If not, even you need any other living beings. Otherwise, like a caged bird, you will live a tasteless life.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a splendid short story it is! A compact but different performance. Identity crisis is a common problem in our lives which is applied here beautifully. Additionally, the writer includes fantasy in the story superbly.
The central character of the story is none other than Sally. The whole story surrounds her. Unfortunately, she had a disability due to an accident. She couldn't adjust with her parents and boyfriend.
Her mate Molly came to solve the problem like a true friend and reckoned that there might be a chip in Shally's brain that controlled her actions.
Sally decided to do an MRI. That chip was found not in the brain, but under the ear. Here, an essence of fantasy has been applied successfully.
It's a great beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review of The Fading sun  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's a fantastic poetry. Here Sun is a symbolic character who guided us for a longer period. He has an enormous ability to enlighten us. His deeds will be remembered with respect.
Every person must die. This is the rule of law. That son is also going to die. But, he wishes to do more for us. So he feels pain in his heart for this leaving.
It's an excellent beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Undoubtedly, it is a good effort to write a short story, but ultimately it doesn't become a short story. It becomes a simple report.
You smartly maintain the minimum characters rule. It is an unavoidable condition of a short story. Additionally, you superbly draw the image of nature. But, you choose the descriptive mood which hampers the pace of the story. Please rectify it to a conversation mode that will help you create interest but the structure of the story should be unchanged. You just need to work on the style of delivery.
I hope you will rectify on your strategy.
Go ahead.
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Review of Royal's Jester  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It's a good short story. Though, Royalty and Jester, lived two completely different lives. Despite that, they were involved in the relationship.
You may be rich, even maybe poor, but that doesn't matter in your happiness. It is a mental state. They were feeling pain in their respective hearts. Those were explained beautifully by the writer.
If it opts for conversation modes in the state of descriptive, the story will gain more readability. So, my advice to adopt this in your second draft is that the structure will remain the same.
It is a pretty beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very appealing lyric. Even, if we consider it as poetry of love, it also remains incomparable.
The teller is a lover. He loves a beautiful lady. So, even the narrator does it in her arms, what would be better than that? He found paradise in those arms. He just wants to be a satellite of her. So, she is the home planet of her.
What a romantic thought it is. Excellent performance.
Write on!


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Review of Kudos To You  
for entry "Kudos to you Cubbee" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly great news for us. You are always looking for creativity. That is perfectly reflected in this exclusive Kudos. It's a tremendous performance. This journey of creativity should be going on.
I hope that you will give us something new in future, too.


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Review of In Rememberance  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great artistic creation by the poet. That poem is in memory of a relative who passed away a few months ago. It is a tribute to that relative. It was unfortunate but in our way of life, we have to adjust to these mourns. Once that person was the undivided part of our life. The narrator could not think alive without the human. But, the bitter truth is that relative is no more in the material world. Despite that, we have to live a meaningful life and go forward to fulfil the goal of life.
It is a sad but well-written poem.
I also pray for the departed soul.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very important poetry. It is the story of our daily lives.
We have a lot of ups and downs in our lives. These are obvious in every life. When time doesn't support us, we must be careful but shouldn't break down and keep patience. If we do that, we must overcome it.
It is an excellent piece of writing.
Write on!


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Review of The others  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a thoughtful Monologue. We, every person, have a separate entity. Though we want to make a good combination with others, our rate of success is at a minimum level. So, what should we do now? Try to understand yourself first. Then try to criticise others. That will help you to realize other people.
It is an excellent beginning.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is a perfect short story that fulfils every characteristic of this form.
There are only two main characters- Richard and Julian. They loved each other. Despite that, their desire remained unfulfilled.
Richard is a tragic hero. He did everything for Julian. But she didn't approve of their marriage, the ultimate aim of a sacred love.
Richard became disappointed and lost interest in life.
At that time, Julian expressed her love over the phone. That was too late. Richard died in an encounter with the police.
The pace of the story is fast and smooth. So, the readability is excellent.
There is a lesson in the story. Julian loved Richard, but always tried to hide it. That created an entire complication. If she expressed her love to Richard on time, they would have lived a happy life. Don't hesitate to intimidate your love to the lover. It's a great lesson.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was a pity that Jones almost broke the relationship between Welks, X, Y and Z to examine their ability. It was unhealthy but needed for their final recruitment. But, Jones did those in his instructor's order who was guiding everything from the shadow.
Jones reported positively about those four guys. But in the case of X, he added, "X has absolutely no memory of you or the voyage". Is it not indicated that the man is the commander who included here the first time and named him X?
We can guess it but the answer is unknown in the chapter.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
X and his mates grew up under a very strict discipline. However, they maintained a good relationship between them. But, in front of the authorities, they were mechanical and always performed their task perfectly. So, they were all allowed in the examination. That atmosphere also helped to build their characters.


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Review of Courage  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (2.5)
If you want to get a successful life, you have to reject all kinds of negativity, first. and then have the courage. If you can prepare yourself in such a way, you must achieve success in life. It is a great advice. The writing also inspires us. But, it is not a short story at all. It is nothing but a report of one human's success who loves nursery.


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