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Oct 9, 2016 at 10:02am

Let me remind everyone that nature is our mother.
Let me remind everyone that how beautiful trees are.
Let me remind everyone that powerful and at the same time how charming rivers are.
Let me remind everyone that grass is the most beautiful sensation to our feet.

Let me elaborate my morning today.
Old tree, i was sitting under a old tree.
Green leaves and cold wind set my soul free.
I felt so relaxed near that old friend.
I closed my eyes and happiness had no end.
Continuous flow of that pious energy made me think.
It made me think about us.
What a mess is our world , a mess full of fuss.
We are worried about progress.
About our dark paradise , i guess.
We are not worried about the most powerful civilization.
The worst part is that for nature we have no admiration.

Then i looked around and nobody was around me.
Trust me , this morning , peace just found me.

( A reminder by Kartik Vats )

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THANKFUL SONALI Now What?

Oct 9, 2016 at 12:40pm

Hi Kartik! If you would like to get reviews for this poem, it is better to place it in your portfolio, provided it is written originally by you. On the left of your screen, yoiu'll find 'create new item'. Click on that. You want a 'static' item for this. Follow the instructions after that.
Don't worry if it's a bit confusing the first time, you'll soon get used to it!
Thanks,
Sonali

Oct 9, 2016 at 2:51am

Today i found writing.com .
A new opportunity for me to show the world that i can write.
A new opportunity for me to try and work hard to make my dream come true.
Like all writers i want to do everything in life which is related to writing.
I can't do anything else i guess because this month i am turning 18 but everyone thinks that i am not serious about life but i am serious about writing so i am serious about life.
Just wanted tell everyone in my first note that you can check my poems on my instagram " kartik vats'.
Yes i like to write poems , articles.
Mostly i write about nature , love , confidence , life , positive attitude .
I will write my poems here but not the old ones .

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🌕 HuntersMoon

Oct 9, 2016 at 8:58am

Welcome to WdC

Hanna ~ Be Kind 💕

Oct 9, 2016 at 9:14am

Welcome to Wdc! You're gonna have a lot of fun here and make friends with a lot of amazing people.

Oct 9, 2016 at 9:32am

yes i am from india