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Review of Timeless  
Review by Afriend
Rated: E | (3.5)
Your words are straight-forward. This makes it easy to read by a greater amount of people. this very good in doing.

You might want to put a space between a few sentences. Here how it will put power into the words. Do try it!

It is good writing. I know, it can only become great.

I would enjoy reading more of your work!

Once again, keep on writing.

-afriend
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Review of self portrait  
Review by Afriend
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked the descriptions. Actually,that part was great!

I wonder, "why most of the first lines in the sentences don't start with a CAPITAL letter?"

I am a NW, also. Maybe you can give me the answer. I would like to learn something from the poem.

I'm not sure of the style. It is a unique style of writing. And with that said... Do continue to write more.

afiend
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