Anxiety certainly is a serious medical condition. People who have never experienced it sometimes find it hard to understand. While medication can help it is nice to hear that you have found some natural ways to deal with it. Music has always helped me as well and when all else fails I watch Monty Python and The Holy Grail, a great comedy that makes all my problems disappear for 90mins or so. Keep on writing my friend, it is a great way to release some anxiety in a healthy way. Best of luck -Aiden
An impassioned plea for environmental sanity from Larry the sasquatch. This was an entertaining poem with an interesting rhyme scheme. I've never written A Kyrielle before but I think I'll give it a try sometime.
I know the effects of insomnia first hand and every line of this poem is relateable in some way. The line "Slaughtered sheep, littered dreams. Hopelessness, fish-less streams" in particular. Well done.
Wonderful storytelling. This piece left me feeling like I had just been told a story while sitting around a campfire. Creepy and satisfying. Great job.
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