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Review by ariyan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
nice actually perfect expressions in short and sweet words very meaningful should take pride fro writing such beautiful poem i always kept on trying to write any poems on animals but never succeeded but you have done justice to the puppies and their life

take pride and congrats for such a beautiful poem
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Review of Creation  
Review by ariyan
Rated: E | (3.5)
nice thoughts, great rhyme scheme in the beginning of the article but does this refers to the cycle of rebirth or just creation ?

its better if u format it at certain places such as

"more specifically no plan; No Method " by sending "No Method " in next line as it gives an unwanted sense of laziness, similar unfaormatiing is seen at few other places take care & keep writing similar articels
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Review by ariyan
Rated: E | (4.5)
very emotional the feelings expressed clearly speaks that either u r expecting or was recently. in the second last line if u leave the word " try " for the next line so that there will be a rimeing with the repetition of the word " me ".
ur last line sweeps the whole world & can be interperated in a number of ways a kind of ambiguity with a tinge of clarity.
will be looking for more writ ups from u
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