Hi Geomancer,
I read and liked your poem, 'Odds' and I thin it's creatively positive in every word. I don't like to gamble odds, solely on the opinions of others, and I won't do the match in such a way. Like you say, "I'm glad I'm in luck today." As long as I know I'm not omniscient, I think the odds are in my favor to trust and try the things I feel are possible. This is the message I read in your poem and I appreciate you sharing it with the site. TY and TC. Have a great day.
Hi masterprocrastinator,
I read your poom, 'been thinking about love' and I think all of the words are heartfelt. I think about love too. The kind of love I believe is true love doesn't alter according to the changing circumstances we live in. I appreciate that you've shared your thoughts with the site because I think what you write about is what a lot of people feel. I do. I'm always seeking and I'm in a great marriage and everything. A lot of things aren't right though, even in spite of the good things, there is bad in life too. I just hope we all find the answers we're looking for. Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi Alissa,
I love your descriptive and creative words, written in the poem 'Rainfall.' This is an excellent and true write with imagery as I picture the rainfall and it's meaning. I never thought of it like how you've put it. Thanks for the thoughts. TC.
Hi Keaton,
'Be so Cold' is a chilling poem with icy words of truth, how someone called 'mother' to son leaves him with what she created. She created a writer and could never take the pen away. It seems that she added to the ink. I think we all have someone like this in our lives. Or have had. They are not unbreakable anymore than the pins we write with. Thanks for sharing. 'Be So Cold' is a haunting poem. TC.
Hi Brent,
'Billions and billions served' is an interesting title for the truthful ten words in the poem you have written. Addiction is powerful and serves others and self. As long as there is self-hatred and life expense, people are gonna 'drank thine spirits.' Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi Cinn,
I like your poem titled, 'Blushing' and I think it has creative word play, creatively written. I get the picture pretty clear. I picture the miserable woman calling her ex or some other man she once loved and having the phone slammed in her face. She blushes but it seems that her mind got away from her. Yesterday is over and she has to let it go. Thanks for sharing your writing with the site. TC.
Hi Whitemorn,
I laughed and laughed, reading your story 'Charlie Brown, The Adult' and I think it's hilarious, right down to the disclaimer. That's quite a list you've got there: Quote-"This story is not meant to offend anyone in the portable potty business, the circus, the Bolshoi Ballet, trapeze artists, the gay community, Little Debby fans, fat people, ex cons, cult members, Mohicans, air plane pilots, daydreamers, AA members, people on probation, or people who wear their baby blankets on their heads."-UNQUOTE. This story is creative and really well written. So now I know what became of Charlie Brown. He's a leakier and he works at crummy jobs. It's good to know that Schroeder went on to do so well in the music business. I always figured he did. I figured Lucy would become a psychiatrist though and help crazy people all her life. Thanks for a really fun read. You have done a super FANtastic job. TY and TC.
Hi Christopher,
I read your poem titled, 'A Husband and his sick wife' and I really like it. The wording in your poem flows nicely with the picture you post with it. I visualize this loving man, fighting to keep his wife alive, and I think of forever love. It reminds me of my mother who took care of her husband in the same way. Thanks for sharing your creativity with the site. I am touched by the words in your poem. TC.
Hi Zeke,
I read your poem titled, 'Curiosity' and I have to agree. We're all people with lives that are puzzles that we put together, piece by piece, completing the picture that has another puzzle on its way. I'm still in an identify crisis and I suppose I will always be, as long as there is a puzzle to put together. It's not a bad thing to have the spice you've mentioned. I like your poem. It's creative. Thank-you for sharing your writing with the site. TC
Hi Elsia,
I like your poem vocabulary and relate to some of what you say. It is my interest to learn new words, though I don't expect that of others, and I think it's wise of you not to back down on taking verbal chances, as you say. If they don't like your vocabulary, that's their problem. Thanks for sharing your writing. TC.
Hi Fionn,
I read your poem titled 'Strong and Weak' and I am touched by the words. This poem has a lot of STRENGTH in it, heartfelt, and affirmative. Someone, as we all know there are such people, always has to belittle someone else, controlling and destroying self-esteem. I'm sorry the person was killed in an accident but, from reading this poem, I think that person was the one who was miserable. How can someone be happy, always finding fault with others, especially with the people in his or her life that he supposedly loves? TY and TC
Hi Wallflower,
I read your poem 'Why' and the line I like best is, "Then you waltzed in like the light of the thousand suns and lit up my armageddon." That's very nicely written and descriptive of a feeling. I only see 1 line that seems a bit long but the rest of it writes from the heart. Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi anxious geek,
I have just read your 12-lined poem titled 'Quittin Time' and I LIKE IT. i like this poem because it shows - and doesn't tell - the reader what to think. The words paint a picture to me, of a lonely woman who has listened to the wrong people, perhaps, and busied herself to keep from believing what she has heard. She thinks to quit but quitting would be the wrong approach, in my opinion, because she shows a lot of energy in her dance. Good poem. TY and TC.
Hi Bob,
i read your writing in 'This is Offensive,' and I think you make some pertinent points to ponder. My condolences to you that Martha committed suicide. It's such a waste of life when people give up. It's good Martha's Mom was\is a positive spirit, to help her cope with her loss, and it's too bad about Timmy. It's not good to mess with the cops. Your points on 9/11, wheels, and offensiveness have made an interesting reading for me this morning. I don't agree with all of your points, per say, but 99.9%,yes. It's good to live in a free country where we can voice our opinions. TY for sharing and TC.
Hello Khaleesi,
I've read your short & sweet poem, 'Valentine Thoughts' and I think it's a nicely written 11 line poem that writes to the heart and reads to mind, making Valentine thoughts that are healthy. To love someone is a Valentines gift that lasts beyond the holidays. Thanks for sharing your writing. TC.
Hi RL,
I read your poem titled 'OLD Friend' and I can feel the word pain traveling through like a bad omen, how and old friend becomes a stranger and the relationship is strangled. Funny, there are 13 lines in your poem, 13 being an unlucky number, some say. Thirteen lines about the bad luck of a friendship gone south. I'd say your poem is pretty creative. TY for sharing. TC
HI Jatog,
I must say, I really like your clever, witty poem. Titled 'Get Back Soliloquy,' your poem takes me back to the 70's when G, P, J, and R sang the song. 'Get back' was a great tune. I think your self discovery in the song as well as the questions you ask yourself are a hilariously written word play. Catch poem. Fun to read. TY for sharing. TC.
Hi Dave,
I read your poem titled, 'Prognosis?' and I think it's creative, a good word play on butterflies vs memory, doctors and love. I think, sometimes, the butterfly was created to live a short lifetime and influence hearts. The wings of memory fly through your poem and write heartfelt words. TY for sharing. TC.
Hi QPdoll,
I just read your writing on 'My Purpose in Life' and I think you have it all figured out. I read the writer of this page on purpose and she seems to be answering her own question. The key words I read are "my girls." You have been given the greatest gift in the world and that is motherhood. Maybe our only assignment in this life is to show up to the day with a willing heart. We just do our best and answers come to us. Of course, you are your own person and I hope you find all the answers you are looking for. Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi Keaton,
I read your poem 'Perpetual' and like it. Your poems are always so heartfelt, in my opinion, and so honest and self-revealing. The first part of this poem 'Perpetual' was taking me, as a reader, to outside forces that seemed to drag the author into the mire. As I read further on, I realized that these outside forces, such as the 'forest' came from within. Not all enemies live outside of us, I thought, as we all have our own dark valleys inside. Thanks for sharing another one of your creative poems with the site. Your poem 'Perpetual' made me think. TC.
Hi Joy,
I read your story titled 'Alone in the City' and I think it's a creative write in descriptive thought about having the city blues and feeling bad. I visualize what I read in your poem and I see an overcrowded metal town with all of it's push and pull. There is a lonely soul who sells wigs and thinks of her mother. It makes sense that her childhood would come to mind. I, too, wander to the yesteryear's when I'm in the hustle bustle of living. Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed reading it. TC.
Hi Cosine,
I read your story titled, 'Lemons' and, I have to say, I've never quite thought of lemons vs life in the way you do!! i think your story is a pretty good word play on life and lemons. I read into the lines of the writing and think, "Do unto others as they do unto you," it being that life is all about our interactions with people. I don't totally agree with that philosophy though but that's OK. The old vinegar-honey approach doesn't work, either, or turning the other cheek. I think I'll just stick with making lemon aid out of the lemons and doing my best. I try to be a kind soul and avoid the losers which is not at all easy to do. Your writing and story is creative and different. I like it. Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi Connieann,
I usually don't read the short stories much on this site but I'm a real sucker for weddings and I couldn't resist. Your story, 'A Very Special Wedding' definitely kept me on my toes, wanting to keep reading to find out what was going to happen next. You show true creative writing in your story and, as a reader, I was delighted the story had such a happy ending. Thanks for sharing your story with the site and I hope you have yourself a really great day. TC.
Hi Daniel,
I just read your poem titled 'I Pray' and I think is heartfelt as prayer is very much needed in our nation. All I can say is that I hope you keep praying and writing as you do. I will continue to read your writing and review. Thank-you and have a blessed day. TC.
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