*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bethannmasarik
Review Requests: OFF
2 Public Reviews Given
2 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Prologue  
Review by Beth Ann Masarik
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
This definitely has potential, though I would have liked to have seen more description. I get the feeling that they are meeting in a castle, but what are their surroundings like? What do the characters look like? I like the uniqueness, and I would really like to see this story grow. I have always been told "show, don't tell." I think that is the same sitchuation here. Even with my own story, I need to remember to add more description. Keep it up! Let me know when you add more!
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bethannmasarik