Awwwwwww! That's the cutest story I've ever read! Haha, not only was it comical in the fact that this poor man found a "lucky" penny, it also had an adorable ending that made me smile. I love little tales like these. Thanks for posting it!
Wow. I'm really impressed by this poem. It captures the feelings of moving somewhere alone exactly. It's unlike anything I've read before. I can completely picture all of these little moments happening, and it reminds me so much of things that have happened in my life. Great job, you really have a talent for using words to inspire emotions.
That was absolutely adorable. The detailing was perfect, and from the very beginning I was completely drawn in. I could almost picture two men talking, maybe sitting at a table eating lunch, or waiting to watch a football game on a holiday with the whole family. So sweet. Good job.
Hey maddayyyyyyy (; I was brousin through the romantical section and just so happened upon your lovely story (: Thought I'd drop in and say hello ;D 5 STARS all the way! haha (: okay, text ya later chica :D peace.
THAT WAS AWESOME. I love a good sad poem, and I was soooo impressed by this one. I think I'm gonna write it down on a white dry-erase board I have and put -BSholl at the bottom. That was very moving. Thank you for posting it, that first line, and all the rest of the lines, is pretty amazing. Great job.
This poem is good, maybe a little stretched here and there. It focuses on more of a happy, light side instead of digging deep into the shadows of love, and people probably aren't used to that. Poems don't usually use the words "travel" and "career". Poems are usually more emotional, and this one touches on it a couple times, but it could be more detailed. the honestly of it is great though.
I've certainly never read anything like this before. It was very new and interesting. You said it was based on a dream you had, I think. Sounds like a pretty amazing dream in my opinion, although a dark one. There could be more detail, to make it a little longer, maybe more emotional. But I was definitely caught by the into and wanted to read more.
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