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Review by C.A. Hobby
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I want to thank you for all of the helpful information you've provided. Nothing pleases me more then writing, and I so want to share my stories with other who do ont know me personally and whose opinions are shaded by personal feelings, you have made this possible. Thank you Thank you Thank you, a million times more!!! This is by far the greatest site I have encountered yet!

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Review of Vieviel  
Review by C.A. Hobby
Rated: E | (4.5)
I must say I was very impressed with your descritive writing, I could almost see the night sky you described and hear the enchanting music. I admit I found myself wanting to draw my own conclusions about this character's destination and his unreal companion. The prologue seemed a little lengthy to me and I had a hard time keeping insterest at first, but as I began to read the actual story I realized that most of the information provided in the prologue was needed and added a certain quality to the story it's self. Still my greatest advice is to try and shorten the Prologe a little. Though I am not the authority on such things I think it will hold the readers attention more the sooner you get the actual story. Keep writing I will be checking back to see where you take the man and his newly found companion.
---C.A.Hobby
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