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Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My grandma has alzheimers too, it robs the person and the family. The best thing to remember is when you were a toddler those souls looked after us with care and love and now that foggy minds steal their thoughts we must return that love. I have strong feelings about the elderly. :)
I read your piece twice it was wonderful. It is a heart-breaking reality for many. It's never easy to see your loved ones fade away like that. Cherrie
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Review of Forever Red  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the format of the poem, it kept the pace of the piece and propelled the reader on. Your images were clear and crisp. You let your story tell itself, if you wanted you could let this poem be the start of a bedtime story.
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Review of Freddy's letter  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a wonderful piece of personal sentiment, images of the moment, written with some historical figures and facts blended into a final farewell.
A letter is a great way to tell a story, I liked it very much.
Cherrie
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
well I'm ready to read part two when you get around to it. Very good story well paced good dialog and a natural flow.
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Review of Camping Out  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem I loved the pace and the joys of camping coupled with the pleasures of returning home.
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (5.0)
The bridge is perfect and well placed
your lyrics have a sound appeal, lost love is always a great canvas
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great piece simple, honest and filled with emotion. Makes you think, remember and feel. Cherrie
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Review of Space  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.5)
soothing flow and rhyme, the story pulls you in and makes you feel apart. It was very good. Cherrie
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Review of Defiance  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.5)
we can learn more about life from nature than anywhere else. My favorite line was ...Over time, by its will, it shall rebound. Once more it will grow and take up the fight as all living things must. .. wonderful poem I enjoyed the flow and the rhyme that you used to deliver this message of hope.
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (5.0)
you set the story up perfect, to good I liked it,
I can just picture a couple of kids in a closet telling the story via flashlight. :)
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Review of Nightmare Beach  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked how the mysterious man appeared and vanished with little explanation.
Great snap shot of a moment in time, a campfire story if I ever heard one.
:) Cherrie
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Review of Marked  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very good, needs to be read in the dead of night to a bunch of kids sitting around the campfire.
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Review of Underneath  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wonderful line ... fear that the darkness will steal out my heart... and great poem, I enjoyed reading it very much. Cherrie
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Review of My Fairytale  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Great ending as you shift from light and hopeful to dark and gloomy till all hope fades away. Well done.
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Review of Under the Bed  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.5)
to cute I liked very much, it was fresh and child like, nice job.
Cherrie
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was soft sweet and serene I could picture it being read while draped across a child’s bed reading it in a hushed tone by nightlight.
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Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. The song has a good flow and i can hear the beat set to it, I do feel you should rethink lines 3 & 4 for V2. Something more metaphorical. But with that said, I liked it.
Cherrie
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Review of Cherish  
Review by Cherrie
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem the flow was sweet and soft and i could hear the rustling leaves. Truly wonderful.
Cherrie
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