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Review by Cyntrolliam
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love how viciously time is portrayed in this piece. Almost a feeling of corruption into those that follow along a path. Like experience destroys innocence? Oh! Like ignorance is bliss in a sense. Anyways, packs a lot of power into one punch, something I think is revered in poetry. Though I'm not sure about the word choice, "weary", because it feels so shadowed from the rest of the poem. Nonetheless, I enjoyed it. Keep writing. (I recommend ignoring my opinions though, I'm still in the 8th grade :( )
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