There is such passion in the words you wrote here. I loved the flow. It made me think about what I'd write when someday my mother or father will pass on. I imagine it being very like this is feeling, flow, and something that evokes touching imagery. "she wasn't just alive, she lived" These are my favorite line in the whole piece. Thanks for the read.
So cute, loved this a lot. It makes me think of my grand parents and parents. Thought the situations were different they got married young and are still together. You did great with the dialog and I could picture it perfectly! Thanks for that great read.
beautifully formed imagery, it made me look for my blanket while reading and think of times at a family beach property for it's cold windy days spent looking out windows.
Very interesting. Not sure I grasp it fully yet, I'll have to read it a few more times. Loved the first line "The gavel dropped and gave life to the machine;" it's a very definite, eye opening, reverberating statement. It caught my attention anyway.
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