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Review of Force of Nature  
Review by Dia Tucker
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The urgency of the words was good at getting the point across. There's a feeling of being powerless because this is how things are,but at the same time not being a victim.
There isn't anything wrong with this grammer-wise or word chose,but my personal opinion is that the different colors take away from the seriousness of the poem.
Other than that I liked it.
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Review by Dia Tucker
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thanks for the tips. Being specific about a review is a problem for me sometimes. Writing what I liked or disliked is difficult because something I liked may be what the author hated or something I disliked might be very personal to the author. I don't like giving the impression that I'm downplaying something that happened or might have moved them alot while they were writing.
And I've also found myself summerizing some parts of the story/poem, I will try to stop myself now that I know it's not helpful.
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