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Review of September  
Review by CostlessShip409
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am sorry for your loss and that it cam like this, but there is always comfort for those who are in darkness and those who morn will be comforted. Don't let this bring you down, for how you talk about them, you must stories, memories, lesions, and morals that you can use and pass on. Take heart for joy comes in the morning (not always a physical morning).
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Review of Inside Not Out  
Review by CostlessShip409
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have been there where the people around you are talking to each other as you would sit amongst them and when you try to speak, they discourage you so you just sit and look pretty as you are apart of the group. This is just more than t teen thing, but there are people out there who want to listen and talk with you. This is so redundant it is not funny.
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Review of Depression  
Review by CostlessShip409
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is always hope and even in the darkest moment of your life. I became self depressed about 7 years ago and I know the feelings. I know how it feels to be in a room of people and still be alone.Even at a church young adults group, that can be difficult for me. Also being a introverted person does not help.
God bless, you can find joy in the darkest of night for I have done it and so can you.
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Review of Shylock  
Review by CostlessShip409
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is one way to incorporate an old play in to a modern short story.Even though this is an extreme depiction of prejudices and invokes a negative reaction, until I found that it was a play you used (and I would clarify that before some our thinks that you wrote this. Very disturbing) to not have quick judgement against you. I am not usually in to hopeless stories like this, but you differently know how to create pathos.
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Review by CostlessShip409
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow...this is an amazing expression of life. If this was written because of an nuclear anxiety. Though your description with the college was amazing for my two college campuses that both look amazing even though I rarely take time to enjoy it. I should live like this.
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