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Review of My Heart  
Review by Duane
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are definately parts of this that move me. The straining sails and the winds blowing the letter from the feeble hands are definately great samples of imagery at play. The repeating line is a bit overdone in my opinion, however the emotion is definately well transcribed. I definately feel the despair and pain in the end of the poem and the emotions are definately well represented in the poem.
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Review by Duane
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very T.S. Elliot. Love it. An extremely well told and funny story. The great thing is I can cast several aquaintances into these rolls which makes me laugh all the more. "But her youthful disposition is quite aware of his poor aim." Awesome line, it conjures so many different thoughts. Very, very well done.
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Review of White Balloons  
Review by Duane
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thank you... I can't say much more than that.
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Review by Duane
Rated: E | (5.0)
Holy crap, my soul is on fire feeling your pain. My own is echoed in those words as well and I can say well done and thank you.
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Review of Autumn Lake  
Review by Duane
Rated: E | (4.0)
As a hiker I can truly appreciate the scene that you painted for your reader.
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Review by Duane
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! Thankyou for sharing what is powerful and real.
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