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Review of PELE  
Review by J Bansagi
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is quite good. I really enjoyed reading it and I think you've doe a good job getting those syllables in. I also like how in each of the stanzas the lines rhyme with each other at the end. Over all its really well written! I might not know who Pele is, but I quite liked it.
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