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44 Public Reviews Given
44 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
My review style is not as most I dont really focus on grammar or on paragraphing, I am not much of a literary technique viewer.I'm an emotional reader I would like the writer to provoke some type of emotion in me. Whether it be pain or fear or pure agony. I need to feel something when I am reading otherwise I wouldn't really prefer reading it.
I'm good at...
I am very good at relating to people, I am very sympathetic but that will not stop me from giving an honest review.
Favorite Genres
poetry, Memos, lyrics, short stories, personal writing, bloggers
Least Favorite Genres
not a fan of biographies tbh
I will not review...
Not going to lie I would rather not read something that is too long and if you know that your piece doesn't have any sense of emotion or feeling to it I would personally prefer you not to send a request then
Public Reviews
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Review of Jenny  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very beautiful. It is quite powerful to see the expression of love through a writers perspective especially when its put as words...
The articulation of your verbs and announces through out the outlined paragraph structures indulge further reading and interest and I think more than just your vocabulary and theme and reason behind what you have written it is the way it is expressed and that as a writer is what is really important.
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very accurate and beautiful!
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
I actually really love this it was deep and beautiful and this is exactly what I look to review. Honesty, rawness and truth. All that was put within just a few lines it was very eye wakening and sweet to read.
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Review by flofree
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
i really love this especially the first part about safety
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like it however it seems like a lot is going on, I cant really pin point what you're trying to bring across but maybe again its the way I read it. I think everyone reads things the way they know how....
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Review of My Father  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is absolutely beautiful and I'm sure your father would have loved it.
kindness is one of the biggest things taken for granted and I believe it is because people are too afraid of the impact it may have, 'how can a bully come to terms with the reality that maybe if he had just been kind that day she wouldn't have killed herself.'
Anyway....we need more poems like this, poems about things people are too afraid to face, so thank you

and I'm so sorry for your loss, your father seemed like a great man, may his soul forever rest in peace.
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very beautiful, it had my heart going and felt so relatable, the part 'twin mirrors refracting infinity. I am enriched by the magnitude'
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Review of Alone  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very dark and I do love dark things but it also felt hopeful like even through the escalation of the darkness you were trying your best to reach for that hope that somehow or someway you would find a little light you didn't but the thought brought comfort
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow this was beautiful by far one of my favorite writings
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Review of Lonely To Wonder  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is good it really is beautiful but it feels like your holding back. Is this your experience because your writing as if your telling someone else's
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Review of Light  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
this was very good. what I understood from this is how light overcomes darkness
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so amazing and i don't know, it felt real like the person who was writing it was in the position the old man was. This was just so amazing the best Ive read since joining this website.

My only thing to say would be I was expecting more at the end, I was expecting a different ending. Maybe it should have been 'a monster in a human being' maybe thats just me i don't know but this, I cant even describe was beautiful I cried like at like the beginning and even more towards the end. Powerful this was powerful!

How do I save this!!
I want to always have this with me, just to remind me bad things are always going happen
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Review of LOST  
Review by flofree
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Is everything ok, writing helps people express what they feel and what they are trying to say, are you alright?
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Review of Acidic Tears  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (3.5)
hello there, i apologize again. I actually just read this and I thought it was very good. It was clear and what you based your title on was talked about in what you wrote and the way you wrote it so neat and persumeable.
I mean the one thing I would say probably shouldn't matter because I am young so it is probably just me, but I feel like some words you used were to heavy for the text, too strong I should say for such a light text but i don't know it depends on what you were aiming for how you wanted your readers to read or image it.
Anyway this was very good!
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Review of A House of Ash  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is so beautiful
To me the story, i don't know how, maybe is just my character,it describes love as a trap.
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Review of What is Love?  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
you're writing, like you've experienced it, even if you haven't. This is really beautiful, you outlook not only your perspective of love but everyone else's. You're an amazing writer and you write form the heart and talk about what's true. Puppy love verses real love!
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Review of Empty  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
omg!! yo like this is so amaizing.
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Review by flofree
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
this sis really good you have a gift
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Review of I Miss  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (5.0)
oh my gosh. Ive never in my life read something so real and touching. My heart shatters for you, not out of pity but because I relate so much. This is beautiful. you've now inspired me to always write form the heart
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Review of Broken Bond  
Review by flofree
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
this is so beautiful, its so relateful! Amazing!
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
this is sooo beautiful. the first few lines just caught me and drew me in. I wanted to carry on reading forever. this seems like a message that is so true and touching. It needs to be spread world wide to all little ones.
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Review by flofree
Rated: E | (3.5)
beautiful.
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Review of Dear__________,  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow. This touched me. I started to cry. I don't know how but I felt something while reading it. it felt so relatable and real. I'm know questioning my life choices.
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Review of Your Night  
Review by flofree
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I feel like this is a personal message about 'your night' its very deep. its really good
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Review of Best Friends  
Review by flofree
Rated: E | (3.5)
this is really good, it could be like a song!
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