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Review by Bowseriffic
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like how you set the mood of the poem with the title and the caption underneath.

The poem itself is very compelling, leaves me scratching for a deeper meaning.

Something to consider - Punctuation. Not on a grammatical level, just so the reader knows where to put breaks, pauses, and stops as opposed to only doing so at the end of a stanza.
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