Wow. It makes you think about the numbers of people who died that are all over the place in textbooks. You never think about the numbers or care, they're just another thing to memorize for a test. All your poetry really makes me think, this poem is really good.
I think this story has a good main idea, the only thing is it was a little hard to read because there were a lot of typos. You could make this into a longer story or even a novel if you wanted ... Overall the writing was good and I really liked some of your descriptions.
This is pretty good. I like your style of writing. You make the characters seem real; they all have different personalities and traits and everything so it makes your writing a lot better than some other peoples'. I'm going to look and see if you've posted any more of this story because I want to keep reading it ...
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