Good poem. I didn't know anyone could make such a long poem about an underwater stone. I'm not very good at grammar or punctuation myself but you didn't capatilize any of the words at the beginning of the line except for the words beginning the stanza or paragraph. When I read your poem I figured that it had much more to do with than an underwater stone. Is that true? Good job.
-jjm
What a funny poem! I love it! I'm Irish also...can you believe St. Patrick's Day is almost here all over again? Anyway, I liked your poem you brought a very Irish heritage idea to the whole thing and didn't leave anything out!!!
jjm
That was an excellent prayer/poem. I really enjoyed reading it, and I even sort of felt like a was intruding on your prayer. I really hope to getting around and reading some more of your work because this prayer is very good. Nice job!
Hope you stop by my portfolio!
-jjm
I was searching for an author who I wished had a great story to tell and I came across your story titled, "Campfire Story: All the Worldly Goods", a very interesting title! So I dediced to click on it and out came this very fascinating story. I liked your story and thought it was...entertaining.
Gee golly wiz! (LOL) I love stories that have to do with the concern of smoking! You made the image so clear in my mind..."Inhaling a deep breath, as if to numb his lungs, he watched as pillars of intangible grey substance danced from the diming light of the last red ember." WHAT A MOUTHFUL! How do you ever come up with such wonderful yet disgusting thoughts? Don't get me wrong...the disgusting thoughts were magnificent because it's what made your story come to make the smoking so real!!! I think it made some people think twice about smoking!
Again great story!,
JJM
P.S. If you can get the chance I hope you can read one of my short stories or poems!
You are great! "I carry youth on my back..." How did you ever come up with such great words?! I can picture the stages of life perfectly the way you described it. When I started to read this poem I almost thought that it would bring me great fear...but instead it inspired me to not fear death! I need to know how you thought of this great idea. Whenever I get the chance ever again I hope I can read more of your poems and if it shows my portfolio I hope you get the chance to review some of my poems!
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