This was a really cool poem! I have never read a poem about bowling before, and I liked this one a lot. I bowl every week, so this makes a lot of sense to me. Your style is very cool, and easy to read. I hope you have more poems about bowling, because it is an interesting subject matter that not many people take advantage of. Thank you for writing this, you have just made my day.
Nice story! I really enjoyed reading this story of yours. Your descriptions of the time period are very accurate as far as I know. Your writing is very clear and easy to understand, plus the subject matter is very interesting. :) I would love to be able to write this, ah, hopefully one day.... My only problem is that the text being so close together with no gaps makes it easy to loose your place, plus it is hard on the eyes.
This is a really nice start to your book! I got hooked by your words in this first chapter, and would definitely by this book if it were on the shelf of a book store. You have a talent for writing in a manner that is easy to understand. Thank you so much for making this public, it is probably the best piece of writing that I have read all day.
This was a really awesome story! Your writing is so clear and easy to understand that it made the story stand out a lot. I envy your writing talent. Did you win the writing competition? I hope so, because this deserved to win. I've actually taken a class like the one you describe, and I know just how hard it can be, dealing with all of those new terms.
Wow, this is a really deep piece of writing! It took me a few reads to begin to understand what was going on here, but once I did, I went "oh...". You seem to be really smart, and I'm glad that you have made this piece public so that I could enjoy it.
My only complain is that the paragraphs being so close together made it kind of tough to read on this computer screen.
This is a fun little poem! I really enjoyed this, and then I read it to my son, Jack, who thought it was great. This is a big success as a children's poem. Most people don't write poetry for children because they they they cannot understand it. This proves that they do and like it. Thank you for writing this awesome piece. I loved it.:)
This is a really cool poem! I don't think that I have ever saw a poem written in quite this style. You pull it off really nicely, as the piece makes sense to me, and was easy to read. There is a lot to think about in this poem if you look beneath the surface. I like pieces that are more than just pretty words. :) This was good enough to be published!
Wow, this was a really cool and unique story! I became really involved in what was going on, and I guess that is a good thing. :) I thought this was a sad piece of writing, like how Grief was literal. That is not something that I have ever saw before. I think I now want to go and read the next part to see what happens. You really have me hooked.
This was a very short piece, but I enjoyed it a lot. Your words took me to another place as the character finally meets the person he has communicated with for so long. I could really feel the tension in the air as he prepared for this meeting, and then you go and end it without letting us know what the other person looks like! A nice cliffhanger though.
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