I do now know the feeling of overwhelming anxiety, or the oppressiveness of knowing that nobody understands those internal beats that keep your heart racing. Though, my wife struggles as you do and I appreciate reading about your experience. I try to make her feel not alone when she is frozen in sudden anxiety, and I hope you have somebody that does that for you also.
This was very cute, and made me laugh a lot! Lizzy is a well written character that I think everyone has met in real life! Great story, it brings on a giant smile and makes one remember their first love, and the strange awkward joy of meeting someone new!
This is witty, brilliant, and funny. Loved the ending with the twilight reference, it was hilarious. I feel that some people may take the beginning serious and get unnecessarily offended, until they realize its a satire. Offers something to both sides of the argument. Great work! Hope to read more like this.
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