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Review by leenu
Rated: E | (2.5)
A DILEMMA
Since the time i was a child,
my desire to be a badminton player was wild.
I played at school,at streets and at home,
but still my dream was never known.

I was a bit timid,quiet and shy;
aspired to be professionally trained,
but could never gather the the courage
"don't know why".

My parents wanted to see me as a successful engineer,
but in my heart i knew,this path can never bring success near.
Was in dilemma whether to follow my or my parent's dream
wanted to get rid of the perplexity in just a scream.

Stepping on a path was not a child's play,
as an erroneous decision might make my future lay.
To prevent my future from bursting like a bubble,
i chose my parent's dream although i still mumble.

In this flux of engineers'
will i ever be able to enlighten my name??
let's see my life plays with me some game
or will shower upon me success and fame.
by leenu..
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Review by leenu
Rated: E | (2.5)
AN UNFULFILLED DREAM
i had a dream which was never fulfilled
geared up all day and night to make it alive
some bottlenecks came my way which left me baffled
and so never gave me even a single chance to dive

my dream was my passion and my support of life
but when i opened my eyes and saw the reality
felt like loosing all sharpness of the knife
i staggerd while heading towards making it my identity...
leaving an impression of regret of an unfulfilled dream
in the complete passage of my life

never give up in the beautiful journey of life
walk erect to make ur each and every dream alive
be confident and sharp as a knife
to make ur every unfulfilled dream revive...
by leenu..
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